Rewriting Poems #2: The Green and My Heart/The Green of My Heart

Weird Poetry

***Another experiment in rewriting. I will be digging into my archives soon to do more. This is my project now.***

Original “The Green and My Heart” (written sometime last week):

I adore you

The way the hesitant breeze

Disturbs

The leaves on a sunny high blue day

In the wooly heat of midsummer:

Warmly and gently,

And almost without detection.

Unless you close your eyes

To feel the movements

Of the green

And my heart.

~•~•~•~

Rewrite “The Green of My Heart”:

Adoring the waves of you in my internal bloodsea is easier than an effortless wind that doesn’t need a single breath to blow into your heart.

The introverted breeze swallows itself and disturbs no one but the water in a leaf and the water in your cells,

And the only sky I see is the one in your eyes.

In your eyes… in your living soulstorming eyes whose gaze heats me like a wooly itching summer that has me molting out of my skin and into

You

Like you are my new skin (like I never had my own),

And I am now forever your hand upon your cheek.

And when I can’t find the sun above my head,

I look towards the sound of your breathing heartwind,

And always towards the you in the green of my heart.

~~~

❤👽xoxoxo👽❤

~~~

*** To sweet summer… fare thee well. ***

5 thoughts on “Rewriting Poems #2: The Green and My Heart/The Green of My Heart

Leave a Reply

Please log in using one of these methods to post your comment:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.